Tuesday, November 24, 2009

Teaser Teusday Six

It's gone. So sad. So sad.

9 comments:

Kaitlin Ward said...

This made me laugh! Loved her thoughts between pieces of the guy's sentence, and how it turned out to be nothing like what she thought.

Alyson Greene said...

This piqued my interest about the world of your story. Master? Pastor? Handprint? I'm curious....

VĂ©ro said...

Love her internal dialog!! Made me LOL! I am also curious about your story.

Prince Trase said...

That was a close call for her! As everyone else had said, your setting or "world" is very intriguing.

houndrat said...

Yeah, I liked the fractured sentence, too, lol! I love misunderstandings like that, and you did a nice job with it.

Kristin Miller said...

Lol, I love her fevered thoughts here. Nice scene!

Deniz Kuypers said...

I'm with Alyson -- lots of intriguing details that make me want to know more about what exactly is going on here.

corrinejackson said...

Loved the byplay of her internal thoughts! She's completely freaking out and it's not what she expected!

Paranormalchick said...

Dang it!!! I missed it :(