Copy editor, editor, author, loving all of it.
This is such an interesting story. Great teaser!
oh love the action! And the last line certainly got my attention!
Whoa. Creep and weird and awesome. This one definitely got my attention.
Oh, poor Sara! This was definitely intriguing! Curious to see what happens next!
Why is Sara bleeding? How did she set him on fire? and what time period is this? I want to know more!
Wow - this is intense! I love how you ended it.
Creeper character are amazing. I mean, they're terribly people, but oh so fun to write and read. Great description!
WOW!!! Creepers always suck me in!! They always heighten the danger factor :) Great snip
Love the action in this! This got my attention too!
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This is such an interesting story. Great teaser!
oh love the action! And the last line certainly got my attention!
Whoa. Creep and weird and awesome. This one definitely got my attention.
Oh, poor Sara! This was definitely intriguing! Curious to see what happens next!
Why is Sara bleeding? How did she set him on fire? and what time period is this? I want to know more!
Wow - this is intense! I love how you ended it.
Creeper character are amazing. I mean, they're terribly people, but oh so fun to write and read. Great description!
WOW!!! Creepers always suck me in!! They always heighten the danger factor :) Great snip
Love the action in this! This got my attention too!
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